My Colour Poem

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My colours are dark and scary

My colours are like approaching storm clouds

My colours have loneliness but try to act tough

One of my colours smells like fragrance

The other looks like ants

My colours look like a bruise about to appear

My colours have a lot of strength and bossiness.

My colours like to lie.

My colours are Purple and Black

And my character is Waluigi

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Latika
September 18th, 2008 at 4:50 pm

Hi Lilo
Your colour poem was awesome. I love it. My favourite part was the first sentence when you said ” My colours are dark & scary”. Bye the way why’d you put mario’s picture if you character is Waluigi?.
Bye Lati :mrgreen
Ash
October 2nd, 2008 at 1:06 pm

Hey Lilly

Thanks for the comment it was really nice.
Your poem is great
:mrgreen:
Dominic
October 8th, 2008 at 5:36 am

Hi Lilly, I’m Dominic. You know how you said that when you smile you make other people feel welcome? Well, I found out when you wave at someone you brighten up there day.
Katherine
October 15th, 2008 at 5:39 pm

Hi Lilly,
nice poem but i don’t know if you had thoses photos before.
Any way, check out my blog i just change the theme!! It looks awsome!

Bye!!